Share This Thread My newest song...would love feedback :) Shad Tele (2460) Announcements Forum 12/4/2008 11:24:07 PM · 43 Views [Respond to this Message] Hey all - what you see above is a new song that I wrote. I also play/sing all the parts. Since many of you are songwriters as well as guitarists, I'd really like your feedback both on the guitar playing and the song as a whole. Criticism (constructive!) welcome. Leaving a comment on the video is also welcome.

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• Respond to this Re: My newest song...would love feedback :) 12/5/2008 6:41:48 AM Nick Scratch (408) wrote: I like the song and the audio production, but I didn't like the video. Not that the video should really even matter, at least from a musical standpoint. Can't really peg what it is about the vid that bothers me, maybe the editing. Maybe I'm just over-medicated and tired...

• Respond to this Re: My newest song...would love feedback :) 12/5/2008 11:05:57 PM Shad Tele (2460) wrote: Thanks. I've found the video aspect to be a tricky business because it does color the song in a lot of ways. It adds a dimension that you can't separate from the music.

• Respond to this Re: My newest song...would love feedback :) 12/5/2008 10:15:05 AM Adriano Parmiggianno (5751) wrote: I enjoyed the song. The vocals, guitar, and piano are fresh and blend well together. Nothing is overdone. Well done.

• Respond to this Re: My newest song...would love feedback :) 12/5/2008 11:09:23 PM Shad Tele (2460) wrote: Thanks Adriano...I've been working a lot on mixing. Hopefully it is making a difference!

• Respond to this Re: My newest song...would love feedback :) 12/5/2008 1:16:14 PM Chris Bond II (1808) wrote: Good writing, good execution, good look/image. If I had a label I would sign you. Throw you in the studio with some seasoned vets and see what slides out the other end. Good Job.

• Respond to this Re: My newest song...would love feedback :) 12/5/2008 11:01:23 PM Shad Tele (2460) wrote: Thanks Chris! So...what are the chances we can get you in to be the next CEO of Capitol? ;]

• Respond to this Re: My newest song...would love feedback :) 12/6/2008 6:42:09 AM Steve Ebisuzaki (404) wrote: Not the style of music I would normaly listen too but you have a great voice and the song did have a nice groove to it. as for the editing I do not know enough really to say but from a laymans ears the editing sounded really good to me.Good work----Steve

• Respond to this Re: My newest song...would love feedback :) 12/6/2008 7:02:51 AM Jeff Rice (3271) wrote: You have a great voice and the sound is really good. I'll buy the cd when it's released. Will you autograph it so I can say I knew him when...? -Jeff

• Respond to this Re: My newest song...would love feedback :) 12/6/2008 11:19:38 AM Bryan Morrison (9687) wrote: A very nice--a Good job man. That's quite an acomplishment. The mixing/recording seems to be about as good as it gets without going to a pro studio.

• Respond to this Re: My newest song...would love feedback :) 12/7/2008 5:43:13 PM Shad Tele (2460) wrote: Recording quality has been something I've struggled with, so it's nice to hear some good words about this one. Hey! Leper Affinity just came up on my playlist whilst typing...I love coincidences like that.

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